Saturday, 31 August 2013


Text 15: A summary of the plot of The Great Gatsby by iTunes

The Great Gatsby follows would-be author Nick Carraway (Tobey Macguire) as he leaves the Midwest and comes to New York in the spring of 1922, an era of loosening morals, glittering jazz, bootleg kings and sky-rocketing stocks. Chasing his own American Dream, Nick lands next door to the mysterious, party-giving millionaire, Jay Gatsby (Leonardo DiCaprio) and across the bay from his cousin, Daisy (Carey Muligan) and her philandering, blue-blooded husband, Tom Buchanan (Joel Edgerton). It is thus that Nick is drawn into the captivating world of the super-rich, their illusions, lovers and deceits. As Nick bears witness, within and without of the world he inhabits, he pens a tale of the impossible love, incorruptible dreams and high-octane tragedy, and holds a mirror to our own modern times and struggles.

Audience: People who are going to buy the movie The Great Gatsby from iTunes
Purpose: To give an insight into what the movie is about, as well as making it sound appealing and entertaining, so customers will want to buy it and watch it.
Format: a paragraph on the iTunes store online.
Interesting language features: It has a lot of powerful description in it, for example 'glittering jazz' and 'sky-rocketing stocks' and 'high-octane tragedy' that makes the movie sound exciting and action-packed. All the main characters are introduced straight away, which would make it easier once you are watching the movie.
How does this text exert power: Lots of big describing words have been used, and the more people and situations are described the more it builds up tension, and it sets the reader's imagination going, and therefore by the end of the paragraph the reader could be imagining lots of action and how good the film sounds.

Text 14: Terry's Chocolate Orange packet

Audience: people who buy and eat Terry's Chocolate orange.
Purpose: to look nice so that people will want to buy it, and to be colourful and eye-catching so that people notice it among all the other chocolate bars that are being sold on the shelf.
Format: chocolate wrapper
Interesting language features: They haven't put anything on the front of the wrapper apart from the name on the flavour, so perhaps they are relying on the fact that either it will catch a persons eye and make them pick it up and read the back, or that people already know what it is, as it is a development of the original Terry's chocolate orange. Also, the writing is shaping like orange peel, so its not hard to know what flavour it is, plus its colourful and stands out.
How has technology influenced this text: The colours are very bright and bold, and the font is very unique to the chocolate because it is in the shape of orange peel, to show that its chocolate orange.



Audience: The main characters are boys, and the voice over is male, suggesting they are targeting an audience of children that are boys.
Purpose: to get the target audience to want to buy the cereal.
Format: TV advert
Interesting language features: They've made a rap to portray the product, making it memorable and fun, so people are more likely to think about Reese's puffs when they are deciding what cereal to buy. They also describe the ingredients of the cereal as 'being great when they're separate, but combined they make the morning time epic' making the cereal sound original and tasty and like nothing that has been made before.
How has the gender of the audience influenced this speaker: The voice over is a male, perhaps to appeal more to males.

Text 12: Blurb on the back on the book ‘Silver Linings Playbook’

Imagine that your life is a film directed by God. A romcom, obviously, complete with happy-ever-after ending. Before the credits roll, there will, of course, be tears, tantrums, and misunderstandings, but you know you'll get there - and get your girl - in the end.

Welcome to Pat's world.

It's a world of silver linings and true love, but also a world where God makes movies and Kenny G lurks in your attic - and when Pat inadvertently befriends the tragic Tiffany, he begins to question whether or not he might juts have got the entire genre wrong.

Audience: It is sort of a love story but it has a twist, so anyone who is interesting in reading those sorts of books.
Purpose: To intrigue people who pick up the book and make them interested to buy the book and find out what happen in the story.
Format: a blurb.
Interesting language features: It is very vague in how it describes the story, giving away bits of the story that you want to string together to work out the whole story. It also leaves a bit of suspense at the end, to make the reader want to carry on reading.

How does this text exert power: It doesn't give a lot away-this puts the reader kind of under the control of the author because they want to read on and the blurb has been written so that the reader wants to keep going.

Text 11: Cien Soap label

Audience: People who want to wash their hands with good quality soap.
Purpose: To inform customers of the features of the soap, and make it look as appealing as possible.
Format: a label
Interesting language features: There is some interesting words used, for example ‘nourishing’ that is something that makes the soap sound like a good thing to buy, and they also start by saying it is ‘gentle’ which is what you would hope a soap is.

How has the gender of the audience influenced this text: Although the colour scheme is influenced by the ingredients of the product (honey) more than the gender of who would be buying it, the way the product has been described (gentle, nourishing) seems to try and influence women more than men, as it is something a woman might be more concerned about rather than men. Also, some of the font seems more feminine, for example the ‘Cien’ font of the logo.

Text 10: Blu-Tack Packet

Audience: People who need to use blu-tack
Purpose: To inform people what blu-tack is and why they should buy it and use it.
Format: Front of the packaging of blu-tack
Interesting language features: On the packaging only short phrases are used, to get the message across clearly and simply and not overcrowd the packaging and make it confusing for the customer. All the fonts are the same or similar, to keep some consistency, and they also have similar colours as well, except for words they want to stand out. The word ‘original’ stands out, perhaps because they know their product is well known and want people to trust them.

How technology has influenced this text: The font is fancy, as it is done in a way to make it look like it has been made out of blu-tack and is 3D.


Discover the dream;
Dream Matte Mousse Foundation from Maybelline New York
The sensuous, air-whipped sensation
One hundred per cent micro-fine for Matte Perfection
The secret?
Our foundation, with silky-matte powder spheres, rides on smoothly.
(whisper) Flawless Finish
Live the dream!
Number one Dream Matte Mousse
(jingle) Maybe its Maybelline

Audience: the product is for use by women, so the audience is therefore women.
Purpose: To persuade women to buy the foundation
Format: TV advert
Interesting language features: They use lots of powerful words, for example 'sensuous' and 'flawless finish' making the product sound very high quality. The tone of voice of the woman varies and more than one woman speaks. At the end of the advert one character whispers a line, which makes it seem more important that you listen to it and take in what is said. The jingle of the company is played at the very end of the advert, reminding the audience they are a trusted brand.

How the gender of the audience might have influenced this text: The product is for women to buy, so they have put in women’s voices to speak, which may make the audience relate better, and they've also used words that women might aspire to be, women may want to be 'flawless' or a 'sensation'.

Text 8: 'Juno' movie poster

Audience: Those that would most be interested in going to see the movie, so teenagers.
Purpose: To make people want to go and see the movie, to advertise the movie so more people hear about it, and to have something that fans of the movie might want to buy and own as a  souvenir or something.
Format: a movie poster, about A1 size
Interesting language features: The title of the movie is in an uncommon font, it is quite fun and childish, as it looks like it has been drawn on with crayons, which might be suggesting what the feel of the movie is about. The play on the word ‘bump’; in the sentence on the poster it suggests they are using the word bump as another word for obstacles or challenges you find when growing up, but then you see that the main character has a bump because she is pregnant.

How might the gender of the audience have influenced this text? : Nothing about the poster suggests it is more for males or females, as the colours are gender-neutral, there is both a male and female character on the poster, and the style of the fonts don’t seem to sway either way as they are neither masculine or feminine fonts. This could suggest they are advertising for both genders to watch the movie. 
Text 7: Angel Slices box

Audience: people who like cake, its colourful so kids might be drawn to it, and it’s interesting so it might catch the eye of shoppers.
Purpose: to make the product stand out and look nice so people will buy it.
Format: Packaging
Interesting language features: They’ve made the logo/writing of Mr Kipling the biggest thing on the packaging, as Mr Kipling is already a well-known and trusted brand to people, and this may make them want to buy it more because they know that the quality of the cake is good.

How technology has influenced this text: The colours of the writing and the images on the packaging are very bright and eye-catching, but they are also mostly pink and white colours, as that is the colour of the cakes that are selling. Each part, for example the logo, the section about free range eggs, and the bit about it being individually wrapped, is finished off nicely and they are separated so it is easy for the customer to see what the business  is trying to say about the product.

Friday, 30 August 2013


Text 6: A canvas of inspirational quotes and sayings from my kitchen wall

Audience: People who would buy the canvas, possibly its more likely women would than men, age range could be anything from twenties to eighties.
Purpose: To create something artistic using words that a person would want to hang in their house, maybe it is entertaining or inspiring or has a personal meaning to an owner of the piece.
Format: Printed canvas
Interesting language features: Each saying is in a different font and in different sized lettering, but the colour of all the words is the same, perhaps to tie it all together into a picture.

How does this text exert power? :  A lot of the sayings are very powerful in themselves, for example “the world is your oyster” is a very powerful saying. Also, the way some of the sayings are displayed larger than others makes them stand out more and therefore more powerful too.

Text 5: An extract from The Fault In Our Stars (the end paragraph)

'“What else? She is so beautiful. You don’t get tired of looking at her. You never worry if she is smarter than you; You know she is. She is funny without ever being mean. I love her. I am so lucky to have her, Van Houten. You don’t get to choose if you get hurt in this world, old man, but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices. I hope she likes hers."
I do Augustus.
I do.'

Audience: I would say this book is aimed at teenage girls, as the main character is just that.
Purpose: The whole purpose of the book is to entertain the reader, but I think that this last paragraph has a purpose of its own, to keep up the mystery of what happens to Hazel and to round of the book in a very interesting and different way.
Format: Extract from a book
Interesting Language Features: John Green uses a rhetorical question to begin the paragraph, and then goes on to answer it with lots of short sentences, building tension. I also like how Hazel’s reply to the letter was so short as well, like it left her almost speechless and not only did It leave her reeling but it leaves the readers reeling when they realise that’s the end of the book, and nothing more happens.

How does the gender of the audience might have influenced this text: The fact that it was aimed at teenage girls may mean that John Green has written things in this paragraph that teenage girls would want to hear coming from a boy about them, and he went very dramatic about how much Augustus loves Hazel, which perhaps makes the audience be drawn to Augustus even more than before from the rest of the book. 

Text 4: Back of the DVD of the movie ‘Les Miserables’

“Set against the backdrop of 19th-centry France, Les Miserables tells an enthralling story of broken dreams and unrequited lov, passion, sacrifice and redemption-a timeless testament to the survival of the human spirit. Jackman plays ex-prisoner Jean Valjean, hunted for decades by the ruthless policeman Javert (Crowe) after he breaks parole. When Valjean agress to care for factory worker Fantine’s (Hathaway) young daughter, Cosette, their lives change forever. “

Audience: Fans of the musical of Les Miserables, of history, and of movies in general. A more specific audience would probably be women, as it has a lot of emotion in it that general women may enjoy more, however men would also enjoy it.
Purpose: To give an initial overview of the start of the movie and to set the story, as well as informing people of the background of the story too (i.e. the fact that they are in 19th century France).
Format: A paragraph of information on the back of the DVD case, placed under various awards it has won.
Interesting Language Features: The amount of information the synopsis gives away is good, as it gives the audience something to go by, as the film is quite long and could get confusing, so as a guideline it’s a good place for them to start. The section uses lots of intense describing words, for example a “timeless testament” which makes the movie sound very important, and a bucket-list sort of viewing. It also creates intrigue for the audience, as it tells how the characters’ lives are “changed forever”, which makes you want to watch so you find out what happens to them.

 How does this text exert power? : It makes the film sound very big and important, and the intensity of the way it has been described as well as the dark colours and images from the film make it seem very emotionally powerful.

Text 3: Heaven Cake Shop and Café leaflet; Celebration Cakes

Audience: Anyone who might eb interested in buying a celebration cake, parents for children, brides-to-be or someone celebrating an anniversary or achievement for example.
Purpose: To give all the options of what is available to the customer, giving examples other than just cakes like “cupcake bouquets” and “giant message cookies” and where they can get ideas (facebook).
Format: A leaflet.
Interesting Language Features: Uses of verbs, for example “giant” is more interesting than bog-standard ‘big’ or ‘large’. Paragraphs are set out nicely to make it clear to readers what the message is that is trying to be put across.

How the gender of the audience might have affected this text: The gender could be anyone really who would like to purchase a cake, and the colours of the leaflet are coinciding with the colour scheme of the shop, which is also pink and purple. The cakes advertised cater for both boys and girls birthday cakes, as well as a neutral one for the older customers.

Text 2: Circus Advertisement.

Audience: People who would be interested in going to the circus, for example families (from the children to grandparents) although not young children.
Purpose: To let people know about the circus coming to town, and to encourage them to go by giving them 50% off with the leaflet. Also, to make it look appealing with Spiderman and the magician looks very intriguing.
Format: It’s a leaflet
Interesting Language Features: Alliteration makes the  name of the circus (“Charlie Chiiperfield’s Circus) more interesting. Lots of exclamation marks, making it sound very excited and lively, much like you would hope a circus is.

How technology has influenced this text: It has different fonts, colours and sizes, images carefully placed on the leaflet. Other than that technology hasn’t really influenced it much as it is just a piece of paper with the information on it.